名师解读2012考研英语一大作文
又一次是成功话题,地球人再也阻挡不住出题人踏向成功的脚步了!今年的三大考试四六级和考研都不约而同的考到了个人成长和成功话题,出题人坚定的脚步一定会带给我们成功的结果的!这也是我在课堂上所讲到过的人生哲理的问题;在我的《何凯文写作高分攻略》一书中也专门罗列出了大量关于个人成长成功的句子(详见56页),当然这次的作文再次印证了我们不能只靠所谓的模板,而应该打破模板,将模和板相分离,模是指写作的框架,而板是里面的句子是可以替换的平时所积累一些句子;
现在我们就用我们平时讲过的句子来写这篇作文:
首先第一段是图画的描述:
第一段第一句推荐是开门见山不需要多余的句子,无论多牛的开头句放在开头老师都知道不是你自己写的,都会觉得你是在“骗字数”所以推荐的写法就是:
As is shown above,
接着描述图画的中心事物,按照我们的老方法用主系表倒装为表系主的方法
in the middle of the picture stands two persons ,
接下来描述两个人共同的动作,用非谓语动词结构:
looking at the broken wine bottle,showing different reactions,
在用独立主格结构描述两人分别的动作:
one signing that “there is nothing left”, and the other being grateful that “there is something left”.
最后一句结尾,这里可以随便从何凯文考研作文高分攻略一书的54页中任意挑出一句:
Simple as the picture is, a certain informative meaning is revealed in it.
第二段的作用是论述:
第一句需要点出论题是什么:
The picture demonstrates two strikingly different attitudes, pessimism and optimism, when facing the same thing and tells us that the enthusiasm and the optimism are of paramount importance when it comes to the personal growth,especially in this ever rapid changing modern society.
第二句表明人们的态度:
Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society.
第三句开始进入平行展开法就是句子的堆砌:
Those with optimistic attitude to the life can relieve not only pressure, but also anxiety and such problems as depression and solitude.
Favorable attitude to the life can broaden our mind, enrich our experience and enhance our vigor then creat an enthusiastic environment for our socity.
People with the spirit of optimism can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status.
以上句子来自何凯文作文高分攻略必背句子。
当然你还可以举例:
Take Hery Ford, a great American industrialist , the creator of the “motor age”, who adheres to the belief for his life time that good attitude renders successful life and career, for instance. It is optimism that helps him achive his glorious accomplishment in the manufacture industry and fulfills his dream to build the car for ordinary working people.
(以上来自何凯文QQ空间终极预测)
最后一句:
Were there no positive mental attitude, never would we taste the real happiness of the success.
第三段的写作就是句子的堆砌和呼应观点:
To sum up, one’s view and attitude on his life determines his future. Different life attitude may bring about entirely different results Many psycholigically fragile and pessimistic young people around us too easily become discouraged and give up when comfronting with difficulties , which makes it hard to believe those youngsters with such mind state can face the challenge and become pillars of the society.
(以上所有句子来自何凯文考研英语高分攻略104页)(或者)
The picture enlightens us becoming more appreciative of the meaning of life and its permanent spiritual values. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having the pisitive attitude in life is very important for us, especially youngsters. (流氓段)
(以上段落来自何凯文作文预测讲义第三页)
完整参考范文:
As is shown above, in the middle of the picture stands two persons , looking at the broken wine bottle,showing different reactions, one signing that “there is nothing left”, and the other being grateful that “there is something left”. Simple as the picture is, a certain informative information is revealed in it.
(KK三步描述法)
The picture demonstrates two strikingly different attitudes, pessimism and optimism, when facing the same thing and tells us that the enthusiasm and the optimism are of paramount importance when it comes to the personal growth,especially in this ever rapid changing modern society. Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society. Those with optimistic attitude to the life can relieve not only pressure, but also anxiety and such problems as depression and solitude. Favorable attitude to the life can broaden our mind, enrich our experience and enhance our vigor then creat an enthusiastic environment for our socity. People with the spirit of optimism can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status. Were there no positive mental attitude, never would we taste the real happiness of the success.
(所有的句子均来自何凯文考研英语高分攻略55和56页)
To sum up, one’s view and attitude on his life determines his future. Different life attitude may bring about entirely different results Many psycholigically fragile and pessimistic young people around us too easily become discouraged and give up when comfronting with difficulties , which makes it hard to believe those youngsters with such mind state can face the challenge and become pillars of the society. (或者)
(以上所有句子来自何凯文考研英语高分攻略104页)
The picture enlightens us becoming more appreciative of the meaning of life and its permanent spiritual values. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having the pisitive attitude in life is very important for us, especially youngsters. (流氓段)
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